I enjoyed the song, to an extent. You still seem to have a problem with volume control and compositionary diversity. However, this should not detract from the wonderful audio manipulation - the concept is very unique, if a bit unpolished. Keep up the good work, as I can only see improvement from here on out!
Sincerely,
Gustauve Adolfus Wilhelm von Drakenhime III
Thank you for your review! :-D
I will work on the volume, especially concerning vocals as you mentioned in my other track!
I have to agree with XsakuX, the Vocals and audio composition are wonderful, but as stated prior, your song itself is not of the best quality - midi does not a good song make. Perhaps you should choose a different music system to do this one, as the current one doesn't do it any justice. Also, as XsakuX has already stated, you need to work on the volume in certain portions, at one point, I can clearly hear what is being said, but in the next, all I can hear is the music (which, as I mentioned before, isn't that great.) Also, try to do less vocal repetition and add more characters - The Scout, Medic, and Demoman have some of the best lines in the game. I hate to sound so critical, but know that I only critisize you because I see a magnificent amout of potential for this song! All in all, it's a wonderful experiment that has magnanamous amounts of potential, and I for one hope that you at least take into consideration what I've said, as I hardly ever leave a comment, much less a true, heart-felt critique, unless I truly see something in the subject.
Best of wishes for your future endeavors, and my God smile upon your life and help you face the coming days with a smile on your face!
Sincerely,
Gustauve Adolfus Wilhelm von Drakenhime III
Very helpful - Thanks a lot for your review! :-D
I will take everything into to consideration.
It Sounds Like My Childhood...
I had a very... interesting Childhood... What with the Berlin Wall there to greet me everytime I woke up... All the Profanities Spread upon it's walls, most of which were placed there by the Russians; Telling Me that my way of Life would soon come to an end, and that they would Bury us. I hate the Russians for what they did to my Childhood; I only hope that the ones responcible will pay in the end... The song is Great, but it makes me think about my past, and that makes me Angry... X(
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I do not Speak American English very well, and I cannot understand a Damn Word of this son... But I love the guttral vomiting of the Lyrics by the singer, and the music is fairly descent... All in all, I like it; keep it up!
This song is kicking... Like Mother Teressa!
At first, I thought this song was stupid, but there was something about it that made continue listening to it over, and over, and over, until I became fanatically addicted to it. It was finally after the 27th time I listened to it that I figured out what made me love it: Time frames 1:09-1:11 - specifcally, the Cow... I don't know why, but that's what did it for me... Gottschundesfluggen!!! It's Insane; I'm insane!
Yes, Bossk really does rule!
He is one hell of a Trandoshin mercinery! I always loved him; when I first saw The Empire Strikes Back, I could get over how freaking bad-ass that 'Lizard Dude' really was. He and Boba Fett are my heros! I now officially love you for making this kick-ass song!!!
Hahahaha
Ich liebe dis so mutt; dis is funny!
Awesome!
Das is sier cool!!!
Awesome!
Das gutt! Das sier gutt! Ich liebe dis sir mutt, dur deutsche is sier gutt!
Wooooow!
Do you realize what you have done?! You have single handedly put all of the emotions and hardships every soldier has ever faced into a single, short, and powerful song! It brings to mind all of the times that I have looked across the burning sands of this god-forsaken land and wonder as to what the hell I was truly doing there in the first place! It brings to mind all of the times that I have witnessed death and destruction, all the times I have witnessed victory and defeat, all the times I've seen flashes in the night - signifying that the conflict was far from over! I can hear the Leopards and the Hauvitzers rolling across the desert landscape in this song! I can hear the trudging sound of marching footsteps roving through the streets of unnamed towns! I can hear every kind of munition discharge imaginable! And, most of all, I can hear the constant screaming and yelling to comes with warfare! You sir, have placed all of that into one single, beautifully rendered package, and for that I salute you!
I thank you for the review.
Its too bad that it makes you relive those things. In an enormous understatement, I would hope that it at least, gives a positive spin on it.
I am happy to hear, and I'm sure Sorohanro would be happy to hear that our music touches you.
Keep fighting the good fight.
Thanks for the review.
My full name is Gustauve Drakenhime III. I am the son of Frederik VI. I have lost seven brothers due to war. I'm 7' 6'', a devout Christian, a little clumsy and, at times, gullible. I am part of the German DSO, my weapon is the DSO Gherwestien18-TD/BSR .
Age 39, Male
Military
Oberweißbach, Germany
Joined on 6/12/07
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